Once upon a time, there lived a great god with great power. With his power, he could do anything he wanted. The god was as wise god that loved knowledge and ruled the world with kindness. The god had a strange love for humans. One of his favorite human was a young and wise man called 'Kahn". He respected and followed the god with his all of his life. One day, the god called Kahn to his side and asked Kahn's wish.
"I would like to see the world of oblivion with you", said Khan. So the god and the man traveled around the world. "I am thirsty, so bring me water " ordered the god. Kahn looked around and noticed a village. He went to the village and asked for water. An old man gave Kahn some water and invited him to his house. Tired and thirst, Kahn followed the man.
At the house, there was the man's daughter. The daughter was very beautiful. Kahn forgot about the god and his misson to find water for him. Kahn worked at the man's house as a cattle feeder. He told of his love of the man's daughter to the old man, and eventually married the man's daughter. They had two children and lived happily for a 10 years.
One day, a great flood reached the village. Most of the villagers died. Desperate to save his loving wife and family, Kahn ran to the mountains with his wife by his side and holding his two children with his arms. During the way to the mountains, the water swallowed the younger child, and he died. Soon afterwards, the older child drowned under water. When Kahn and his wife had nearly reached the mountain, she slipped and drowned under water.
Alone and sad, Kahn reached the top of the mountain. On the top of the mountain, there was a tree. Under the tree, there stood the God. "Where have you been? I waited for nearly an hour!" boomed the god. Kahn was very confused. "This is the world of oblivion." said the god.
This story tells an important lesson. Do not fall in oblivion. This story was originally supposed to be an adventure story, where Kahn wished to rid the world of evil. However, I think that this story is better, because it tells an important lesson. Also, I think by chain writing, you can get new ideas.
This is pretty amazing. Which students wrote this??? It sounds like it was written by a famous writer from thousands of years ago. Almost biblical. I'm very curious... Amazing!
답글삭제I also enjoyed it, though it is very sad. I wish I could ask you guys more questions about it. Wonderful writing!